"i died alone ... a long long time ago"

sunshine of you, dissipates in me
dissipates in my brume

drain some daylight from this blaze colander
miles of me, covered in your silhouette
carved in my palm … like fate

turn around, maybe a half-step
throw me, maybe a glance

the more I fly away, the less skies I map
am the faerie … you waited for
am the flute … whose fire you stroked

“the fairy would one day alight from the skies…”;
you sang
 
“i feel her noiseless steps …, I see her, shy and soft … blushing pink and flustered”;
you crooned

am the footsteps … which fluttered your heartbeats
am the one … you longed for
am the one … you stopped looking for

banished from stars
fallen from the clouds;
on cold winds and desert sands
my breaths move on…

let me now be a song … un-composed
while I slowly squander in your heart
let me now be …
eternally existent in this mortality for non-existence of your longing…

CpRyt@NeerS

17 comments:

Jello said...

how original :)
One has to create a spacious comfy environment such as a low-light room with wood-burning in the fireplace and then listening to this with eyes closed - serenity everywhere.

Margie said...

What can I say?
Beautiful!!!!
You create magic with your words!
I must have read this 5x's.

It was so lovely having a visit from you again!
Isn't jake truly awesome!

Leaving for Nova Scotia in just a few days....thanks for the nice wishes!

Take care, Neers.

Margie

Scribblers Inc said...

woooo...thats gothic!!!

Scribblers Inc.

phatichar said...

poignant. :)

~Deb said...

I agree with Margie: you created magic with your words. You have even given me a nostalgic kinda feeling with this poem.

Unbelievably beautiful!

Kuan Gung said...

"I died alone...a long long time ago"...after numerous readings...I love the title and the verse...incredible...

~Deb said...

Just wanted to let you know I included your comment into my post for today. :) Thank you for inspiring a post for me!

Kafo said...

hmmmmm
i have read it twice

hmmmmm

Sreejith Kumar said...

sweet lines!

Roy said...

This is .. this is “Neers” we loned for ..

What a sign off
let me now be a song … un-composed
while I slowly squander in your heart
let me now be …
eternally existent in this mortality for non-existence of your longing…


Can you make the last line shorter or divide (would be great ..)

My fav:

the more I fly away, the less skies I map

am the flute … whose fire you stroked


Cheers!
Roy

Sunny Daffodil. said...

Hey..Am lucky i stumbled on to your page..Real nice posts you got out here.The originality of your thought process is just fantastic!

Jaycee said...

The more I read this post...the more I become speechless.

But one thing I know, with God you can never die alone again.

Sojourner said...

got any more recommendations? all of Murakami I could get, are done with.... thank you.

nlonve (nu-lo-ne-vei) said...

"the more i fly away, the less skies I map" ... sublime..

Kuan Gung said...

banished from stars
fallen from the clouds;
on cold winds and desert sands
my breaths move on…


Powerful stuff!

Casperbaba said...

your words took my breath away! this is all i can say.....

begijn said...

Lovely, sad, longing. Makes me think of my unrequited love(s).