warped moonlight - "smells like teen spirit"

"A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world." - Oscar Wilde


on the banks of an inky pool, an edge to the senses - goosebumps of skin, fire in the eyes, icy hands, naked soul.....and the world wishing new year's but a distant din... all i could now see his eyes burning holes in me, somewhere... and then a splash... slow strokes.... held breath ... a complete submerge... my first moonlight kiss

and am getting married to the guy!


CpRyt@NeerS

19 comments:

666 said...

aaha :-)

badhai ho badhai ho.. mubaraka khushamadeed..

Enjoy. All the Best!!

Nitish said...

:) That was awesome! The best new year Eve ever!
Ummaahh!!

Eclipsed Thoughts said...

Congrats...
last line made me wonder coz i was thinking maybe u were swimming.... ahem.

Sojourner said...

choo chweet :)
and... the countdown begins here :)

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Sojourner said...

ahem... this isn't exactly a typical post either :) what the hec can one respond?!

you know what they say about beauty beheld (by no eyes YOU know of) plus I must be exaggerating sans resentment(poetic license;)... and thanks buddy... :)

This trip, a big leap, is uber special :).... can't think of a better occasion to leap than when people show their faith to each other...

Kafo said...

wow wow wow
what is happening

okay chill
i thought we were watching movies and now we are getting married

what did i miss

lol

explain ooooooooo
i love the Oscar W quote

Priya said...

Congrats to you sweet girl and wish you all best:))

Jaycee said...

LOLLLL...I am soooo EXCITED for you Neers!!! I know that there are butterflies in your tummy, but just trust God that He will be with you every step of the way...especially as you're walking down the aisle.

Yay! You could email me an IV....*wide grin*...(depends on accessibility)...you're having a thanksgiving wedding, yippee!!!

Air said...

Finally we see a happy note,

Alas !!

starry nights said...

congratulations Neer.I am so happy for you.love the poem .

~Deb said...

Congratulations!!! Beautifully put!

Please let me know when you two are in NY! We must celebrate! :)

Neers said...

@666: Shukriya, Dost!

@Nitish: Silly!

@Eclipsed Thoughts: I WAS swimming!

@Sojourner: yep, the countdown has begun n god, am freaked out!

@kafo: you know what, exactly my thoughts... "what just happened" :p

@Priya: Thank You, Dear! :)

@Jaycee: Darling, will mail you the details... :p

@Air: yeah, decided to have a happy ring! :)

@starry: thank you, ma'm! :)

@~Deb: Thank You! And, You Bet NY celebration is a must!

seriously_frivolous said...

Hi Neers,

This is great news! congrats. When is the big day...and where?

My personal laptop crashed and the lazy bum that I am, it took me a month to fix it...that sorta explains why I was outta action...So, when are you gonna send the invite :)

Air said...

Happy note ending with a happy news,
lets visit when the next happy news comes.

May all your wishes...

Priya said...

May be I can expect of sweet boxes from you. Just kidding. Have a great time...

Da Rodent said...

WOW.. Congratulations :)

Very sweet... :)

Sojourner said...

Game? hmm. If I knew, that would have been the title :)

[really nice template... overused lattice web thingy but I ain't complaining :)]

Kuan Gung said...

What a great pen neers...you have quite the incredible talent...loved this and the there's that very lucky man!